My essay:

Nowadays almost all schools have a self-government by pupils. It is extraordinary problem now. Some people consider that pupils should be involved in decisions about their school and should have a say in how things are solve. But other people think that pupils are so young to take part in such important decisions.
On the one hand, as we know after schools’ graduation we get on in the adult life. We shall need some life experience in any hard situation. We should solve the problems independently of someone, else you will be able to have a bad reputation, for instance, fancy pants.”When I was a pupil and studied at school students could solve any problem very fast and in an organized way” somebody says.
On the other hand, if pupils give more rights than they have now they will take part in decisions themselves, without parents and teachers. To their mind pupils just must have knowledge, because the others disturb students. And they can make a lot of mistakes, because haven’t got any life experience. “They are sure that actions of pupils should be restricted by teachers’ council” someone says.
To sum up, I’d like to tell you to be patient and hard working at school, you should take part in school life, create you school, school of your dreams, because only you can change you how you want seeing it.

231 words, for and against.

и не сокращай! нельзя писать I'd) и желательно не использовать фразовые глаголы
мб что-то не поняла, сорри, если что

will?

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