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There are those who state international tourism, which has really caught on nowadays, is the most enjoyable and useful way of spending free time. Others' attitude to it is rather hostile. My idea is that travelling abroad has lots of merits, so it is worthwhile.
I consider so because, firstly, there is a great variety of places where to go. You can relax, lying in the sun, if you go to the South, ot have an unforgettable camping holiday, etc. Secondly, it is the best way to acquire interesting facts about foreign countries, their culture and sights. Finally, sometimes travelling abroad may cost even less than travelling around the country (if you go to Turkey, for example).
However, it is also claimed that international tourism has more cons than pros. They say every culture has its own features, so, misunderstanding of a country's pecularities may cause a conflict. Nevertheless, I suppose, it depends on a certain person's character and manners, as adequate people try to avoid arguments. In addition, it is stated that you can get lost in an unknown town, if you lagged behind your group. Contrary to this, there is an endless number of maps and guide-books which you can find in every bookstore all over the world.
To put it in a nutshell, though this question is rather controversial, international tourism satisfies us in lots of ways, so I am inclined to back the point of view which says travelling abroad justifies its popularity without any doubt.

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